FB Conversion Ad: Traffic to Kids Play Equipment Website

Delivered Copy

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Tell Nan and Pop to get their own bloody trampoline (or Teepee or Monkey bars or Swing Set)

From Winton to Werribee.ย 

From Kingston to Kakadu.

From Canberra to Cairns.

We deliver to all the places you might find kids (which is basically everywhere across Australia).

Helping Aussie Tin Lids have fun outdoors since 2012.


๐Ÿ‡ฆ๐Ÿ‡บ Aussie owned and managed business.

โšก Lightning fast shipping and deliveryย 

๐Ÿ’ฐ Buy now and pay later available

p.s. Our big stuff is for outdoor play (or indoor if you live in a mansion or a castle). ๐Ÿฐ

p.p.s. No Nans or Pops were harmed in the making of this videoย  ๐Ÿ‘ต ๐Ÿ‘ด



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Headline Option 1 (40 characters or less):

Gifts For Kids (or Nan & Pop) Australia-wide ๐Ÿคธโ€‹โ€‹๐Ÿ‡ฆ๐Ÿ‡บ

Headline Option 2 (40 characters or less):

Putting Smiles On Dials Australia-wide ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Description (30 characters or less):

Buy now and pay later available. Delivered to your door ๐Ÿšš ๐Ÿšš


Product/Service/Brand Promoting: kids outdoor play equipment company

Platform: Facebook

Length: Write What it Needs (Writer to Choose)

Objective: Conversion

Style/Tone: Get Super Creative

Target Audience: parent or grand parent looking for a gift. this ad is for a look alike audience so it is reaching a cold audience

Don’t Say or Claim:no american words like celebrate the holidays, we call Christmas not holidays in Aus. No religious words either please.

Additional Notes/Details: like mentioned this is for a cold audience and a look alike audience. looking at higher end sales not the cheaper prices. thanks

Sick of feeling like you’re glued onto the boring, old traditional (read patriarchal) way of writing Social Media ads? Yeah, me too. So I decided to change that. I took my large box of copywriting skills and upended them on the floor, rummaged around for a while and finally took out the ones I like best….

Turns out it was writing words that sound cheery, lighthearted, ridiculous and just like a human being wrote them.ย 

We make videos as well. They’re pretty cool.